OOPS! DAVE CAME THROUGH! | 2006-11-05
But I'll look at his tomorrow.
I am old and not fair.
Maybe old and not fair beats having no Bob at all.
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#1 Alan B. | 2006-11-05 03:50
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Its been a slow day, I am relieved we have a post or two. Hey Bob did you get a life? I'm joking, miss yeah!
#2 Das Hund | 2006-11-05 14:34
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Bob, my email address should work fine.
#3 Dave | 2006-11-05 15:18
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My approach was to caption the flow propositions and arguments, do some sequential reordering, grammar cleanup, and paragraph segmentation.
I also did some slight deletions of introductory material that did not seem to me to fit.
But this morning I went through it again, made some more minor changes, and the propositions and arguments seem to read well.
If you want me to forward this (further modified) draft to you, tell me.
I don't know if you were expecting this type of "review", but I am compulsive about organizing things to surface the intellectual content as clearly as possible.
Your work is a fantastic political education on America's economic and social development and conflicts.
As I have said in other posts, the essence of competitiveness is to be able to see and hear what others don't. And that is what you work does, it appeals to "wolves" because it is us "wolves" that are searching for the deep insights
#4 Alan B. | 2006-11-05 20:29
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Bob, I haven't recieved any e-mails from you as of yet in reguards to your writing. If you things are running smoothly enough, with those who are going over it for you at present, then that works for me. I'm available to assist you either way. Alan B.